devoidgazer's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FAT GRATTE/BIG BREAST]

I love the style you got, I recall seeing KIMBERLY!!! which was also a very fun animation. El humor esta buenisimo! Good work!

[rabbit jack]

Rabbit Jack... Rabbit Jack, I adore that part

[Foray and Scott: The Distraught Desert]

I kept thinking about this animation even after the jam ended, something about it just stuck with me. I would describe it feeling like a high dream, incredibly surreal from the animation to script. Even though many parts were incredibly difficult to understand, I was laughing so hard at the clunky animation mixed in with the silly dialogue that it made it entertaining. I genuinely enjoyed the dialogue. If you plan to use more AI dialogue you should consider adding captions. I can tell a lot of effort was put into script writing because the humor complimented the absurdity of the animation and situation.
First time for everything I suppose. It made me reminiscent of my very first animation. I find your video encouraging in a way, seeing others try something for the first time and being ambitious to finish it.
I highly commend the effort on your first blender piece. Keep learning, let your ambition serve as your guide but never let it overwhelm you!

coystags responds:

Thanks, I will be sure to add subtitles in the future if I continue to use automated audio.

[Tankforce Action Heroes]

I'll take the entire stock! :]
Awesome work with the voices

[Tankmen VS Snake]

pene chiste

[Shards of Mania VHS Trailer]

The art on this is phenomenal. Absolutely adore the art. What a lovely trailer, it gets me intrigued genuinely. Looking forward to your personal project :)

[Those Good Ol' Golden Wonder Days]

Absolutely love the mixed media in your entries. It's an absolute pleasure to watch

[Zmorg Inception (pilot episode)]

Nice work! I can tell that a lot of effort was put on the production because 3 and a half minutes is quite a lot, your effort was not in vain! A few things to note, some still-shots went on for a bit too long. Some shots were also awkwardly placed. I had a difficult time understanding what was going on until I viewed it a second time.
Other than that the sound design was really great. The music really fit the sort of humor tense moments of the episode, hope you continue expanding on this lore :)

LostChronology responds:

Thank you for the constructive criticism! :)

Yes, actually I started more focused on music production and tried to take up digital visual art and animation later on, so I have a bit more experience with sound design like the design of the alien voices which I built up with the help of Vital (a wavetable synthesizer) and heavily changed with effects to change the mood and sounds of it for the simulation of talking. In scenes like the walking scene to the computer at the end I have increased the metal bonk step volume gradually to add to the realism sound wise of that scene.

It definitely took a lot of effort, in the end I worked on this for 2 weeks and I had to draw, color and animate everything by my own which is the reason why some scenes are more worked out than other scenes, I still hadn't colored and animated everything by the 19th of July and I am sure that the quality would have been better overall had I taken more time, but I decided it was more important for me to make the deadline than to maybe have a better result, but not being able to participate in the Saturday Morning Newgrounds event with my submission which I worked on for the entire day at some days to get it finished in time.

I'd like to DM with you to get a bit more insight on the shots technical wise as I would like to improve on that.

Again, thanks for your helpful feedback!

[Dr. Fulp: Professional Newgrounds Therapist]

absolutely hilarious

[Baby pico IS BREAD]

no he can't cuss! who taught him the bad word! haha XD