That vomit scene felt completely out of place but man that looked so fun to animate XD I'm curious to know how it went about when you gave the vomit script to the VA's. They did such a great job, all of them, and WTF BROCK BAKER, no wonder I thought I heard yo mama jokes!
I hope you don't mind if I nitpick, but the pacing could use some work. Some pauses felt like it went on for a bit too long. Also, don't be afraid to try out more interesting angle shots as well! The camera angle you used when Senpai found the mouse was hilarious. I would love to see more interesting shots like those from ya! :D